Fola you need to post more regularly with your progress and important lessons such as the studio, learning Photoshop and Illustrator etc.
You also need to add detail to what you are doing and to complete missing tasks. Case studies were not finished or worked on and there are no media kits. This is reflected in your presentation of your idea which is very vague on target audience. Think about your typical reader, create a profile for a typical reader - this will help.
Your college magazine is here but it has not been evaluated, there is no feedback or targets set. You have not completed the newsstand task or considered other methods of distribution. Your presentation has some useful detail such as genre, featured artists and possible mastheads (not master heads or logos). Use this and feedback gained to add detail - fonts, colours, layout, journalism etc.
You can definitely do more, everything feels a little rushed or unfinished. Amy
Fola you need to post more regularly with your progress and important lessons such as the studio, learning Photoshop and Illustrator etc.
ReplyDeleteYou also need to add detail to what you are doing and to complete missing tasks. Case studies were not finished or worked on and there are no media kits. This is reflected in your presentation of your idea which is very vague on target audience. Think about your typical reader, create a profile for a typical reader - this will help.
Your college magazine is here but it has not been evaluated, there is no feedback or targets set. You have not completed the newsstand task or considered other methods of distribution. Your presentation has some useful detail such as genre, featured artists and possible mastheads (not master heads or logos). Use this and feedback gained to add detail - fonts, colours, layout, journalism etc.
You can definitely do more, everything feels a little rushed or unfinished.
Amy