Fola, you have some interesting points and questions raised in your article and have considered your target audience. You do need to proof read to make sure everything makes sense. Your layout could use some work, columns and images need to be thought out more carefully, looking at magazines and their conventions will help with this. Also you have no title for your article, just the magazine name in a large font.
Fola, you have some interesting points and questions raised in your article and have considered your target audience. You do need to proof read to make sure everything makes sense. Your layout could use some work, columns and images need to be thought out more carefully, looking at magazines and their conventions will help with this. Also you have no title for your article, just the magazine name in a large font.
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