Front Cover - the main cover line should have a bright outline and the image should be smaller . "A-YSHA" coverline should slightly be moved down and smaller.
Contents Page - add more to the contents . Pictures are unique and attractive.
Double Page Spread - main image was good however i shouldn't of rotated the picture. I should place it again but straight, I should also add page numbers and add 1 more questions.
Overall there was a lot of positive feedback. The layout were hailed and of a high standard.
I will take into consideration of what they said to improve my magazine.
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